A little boy in a rural town in Mozambique is competing with 100,000 patients for the attention of the only three doctors available to him. Meanwhile, in Nicaragua a mother is torn between spending money to put food on the table or tending to her son's illness as they survive on only one dollar a da…
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African American Admission Essay Sample
I energetically clap my hands as we chant in unison, "Ooh, I feel so good, like, I knew I would... Ooh, I feel SO GOOD!" This has been our weekly ritual for the last three years: me in a circle of women prisoners at the Rhode Island Correctional Facility, all of us yelling at the top of our lungs wh…
MD Admission, Volunteer Medical Worker
Too young to volunteer in a hospital yet too old for summer camp, I was determined not to idle away my first summer as a high school student. Undaunted and striving to help my community, I inquired about our local nursing home. My grandmother refused to enter the brown building with me, unable to in…
Medical School Admission: Explaining Low Grades
Pounding, rushing footsteps started to close in on me. The roar of the crowd echoed, as I extended my hand to receive the baton that signaled my turn to run. As I tightly wrapped my fingers around it, I felt the wind rush around me, and my tired legs started to carry me faster than I ever dreamed po…
Bilingual Spanish, Urban Hispanic Community
"Call 911!" I shouted to my friend as I sprinted down the street. The young Caucasian male had been thrown fifteen yards from the site of impact and surprisingly was still conscious upon my arrival. "My name is Michael. Can you tell me your name?" In his late twenties, he gasped in response as his e…
Pre-Medical Studies Certificate, Woman from Tajikistan
Civil war, suffering, poverty and death are things that most Americans, will thankfully never personally experience. Before I was fourteen, I had endured all four. I was born in Dushanbe, Tajikistan and lived through half of a civil war, coming to America with my family as the devastation contin…
Post Bachelors Pre-Medical Admission
I stared at the words on my company’s semi-annual client satisfaction survey: “have Nilma cloned”. Three simple words, yet a confirmation that all my hard work, my striving to give all that I am to the people I work with and for were appreciated by those around me. Reassessing all that I have …
Pre Medical Admission, Asian Applicant
I was raised by a pair of doctors in Uzbekistan. My mother is a cardiologist and my father is a neurosurgeon. As a result, I was always encouraged to believe that becoming a doctor was for me the most natural course in the world. As four out of five of my aunts are also MDs and a fifth has a PHD…
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